A Dewdrop Poem by M. Asim Nehal

A Dewdrop

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Silently slipped
From the dark night
Hoping to see the bright light
From the familiar zone
To the unknown
High in spirits
As I went by
All seems to delight
Busy with their chores
As if needed no more
Were amused as I fly by
May be they all knew
The secret awaiting to unleash
Instead of raising an alarm
They cheered with warmth
As my return was not possible
I was in full zeal
As I entered the ionosphere
Got the first bout of atmosphere
All my purity suffered
My enthusiasm crushed
Gravity started to pull me down
I prayed, leave me alone
My plea was unheard
Finally, I landed on a leaf
Rays quivered through
As I remained motionless
A blow of wind made to bite the dust
And now I am part of it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 12 July 2019

My plea was unheard! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mihaela Pirjol 09 July 2019

To be able to empathise with the dew-drop, and go along with it through all its obstacles, it is the very emblem of a refined poet!

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Valsa George 01 July 2019

The adventurous journey of a dew drop from heaven's heights to the Earth is beautifully described! The dew drop precariously balancing on the blade of a leaf got shaken by the wind and fell into the mud! Great imagination!

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 June 2019

A lovely piece on the journey of a dewdrop. It begins well and ends beautifully... A blow of wind made to bite the dust And now I am part of it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 June 2019

Silently slipped From the dark night Hoping to see the bright light From the familiar zone To the unknown High in spirits As I went by All seems to delight.....fantastic beginning. A beautiful poem on Dewdrop having touching expression is amazingly shared.10

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