Thou with fiery brilliant charm
Will One day softly pass in calm
Like the embers burn and blow
Leaving ash and lose the glow
The beauty of thou feel proud
Will wear a milk white shroud
Thy dust made body into dust
on breast of the earth be thrust
So listen the bard with note divine
Spread the love and always shine! !
brilliant what must be said just brilliant..................
Ah so poetically factual, wow! A superb poem. Yeah we wud return n merge with dust whether beautiful eh. So true n i admire d shinin remarkable lines n vote for it.
Love is divine and it shines forever. You've expressed it nicely.
A nice spiritual poem Saeed well written with some nice poetic lines. Worthy of a nine out of ten!
Wow Saeed. You are truly something. Something fantastic this piece is. I really loved this poem. the metaphors similes and every figure of speech is used masterfully. milk white shroud) (dust made body into dust) (Like the embers burn and blow) and many more. They carry grand message. Fantastic
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
super yar......read it but will comments later, , , , dear Jan seems that u r under divine care nowadays