What I see around is the real face
I don't believe what scriptures say
What religion is, just demarcation
To make sects and divide human
To me acceptable is not you do say
Greater religion is humanity then
One God, one faith and one end
Idols fake be broken away
All have to pay and go away
So spread the gospel of love one
And be united for the long run
Well Well Well my friend too much courage to write this poem, even more to post it. Commenting on it is as difficult as writing it might have been. ........................................................................................................................................................... I wish it tell you everything A nice poem though
wow the message is fabulous.......... here i see a philosophy in poetry like the old classics had, well constructed and coherent but your notes with thousand apology not appropriate to your poem......... Islam and humanity though preaches as same but in practice................. hope you respect my humble views To me acceptable is not you do say (here you decided what is true or false) Greater religion is humanity then (so be universal in your approach, respect other creeds as well) One God, one faith and one end (everyone hold this belief) Idols fake be broken away (you said the other have fake idols) you have gifted a talent,
Saeed jan, I understand you...all we wanted in life is love for each lives, we may separated by barriers of thinking, so one if we diffuse mind to be united...Like unwritten your soul to people eyes, will they understand what really lies in your heart? can they see the love inside? it is a blur sign to shape you, the race, color, religion, nationality, gender, age, religion, ideology, poor or rich, and many more....but once they grab the meaning of your heart to tell they will find all is about sincerity, to bloom love for each whom see it by hearts of theirs..a nice write Saeed_Unwritten Soul
well i loved it the poem the message and a beautiful heart holding a flower......a brilliant and phenomenal and truthful piece indeed i am glad you shared it with me........... thank you for sharing sir love payal
An amazing and thoughtful poem. I fully agree with the Poet's Notes, but be careful in your writes, you are living in an area, badly affected by religious extremism and terrorism. May Allah protect you from the enemies of humanity!
Truth outweighs hypocrisy .. Your words have beauty. & vision Old eyes new vision Thank you for posting your work.. Your style is remnant of the master himself .. You have such a gift...
Spreading the right gospel through the right people is the need of the hour. Humanity must thrive on inherited traits and mutual dependence and selfless love. The image of a God invented in the extreme past of laying foundations to human civilization is not the ultimate factor which can correct man`s mindset now. Any religion that lives in the mind of an individual; not a group nor a sect can alone now resurrect the man from this mire.... Thanks a lot for expressing your great thoughts.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow...really the message is worthy of appreciation....................