Gospel Of Love Poem by Saeed Jan

Gospel Of Love

Rating: 4.9


What I see around is the real face
I don't believe what scriptures say
What religion is, just demarcation
To make sects and divide human
To me acceptable is not you do say
Greater religion is humanity then
One God, one faith and one end
Idols fake be broken away
All have to pay and go away
So spread the gospel of love one
And be united for the long run

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Islam is the religion of peace and love but unfortunately our media has distorted its image badly... V muslims are not what we are portrayed... V believe in equality of all humans and share love with each n every without any discrimination on the basis of race, colour and religion... All of us have to return one day, so why such differences and hatred then.... Love U all my fellow beings... I'm a muslim holding a flower in hand
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Payal Parande 04 November 2012

well i loved it the poem the message and a beautiful heart holding a flower......a brilliant and phenomenal and truthful piece indeed i am glad you shared it with me........... thank you for sharing sir love payal

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Unwritten Soul 04 November 2012

Saeed jan, I understand you...all we wanted in life is love for each lives, we may separated by barriers of thinking, so one if we diffuse mind to be united...Like unwritten your soul to people eyes, will they understand what really lies in your heart? can they see the love inside? it is a blur sign to shape you, the race, color, religion, nationality, gender, age, religion, ideology, poor or rich, and many more....but once they grab the meaning of your heart to tell they will find all is about sincerity, to bloom love for each whom see it by hearts of theirs..a nice write Saeed_Unwritten Soul

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Xelam Kan™ 05 November 2012

wow the message is fabulous.......... here i see a philosophy in poetry like the old classics had, well constructed and coherent but your notes with thousand apology not appropriate to your poem......... Islam and humanity though preaches as same but in practice................. hope you respect my humble views To me acceptable is not you do say (here you decided what is true or false) Greater religion is humanity then (so be universal in your approach, respect other creeds as well) One God, one faith and one end (everyone hold this belief) Idols fake be broken away (you said the other have fake idols) you have gifted a talent,

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Jahan Zeb 06 November 2012

Well Well Well my friend too much courage to write this poem, even more to post it. Commenting on it is as difficult as writing it might have been. ........................................................................................................................................................... I wish it tell you everything A nice poem though

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Saima Ali 10 November 2012

wow...really the message is worthy of appreciation....................

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Akhtar Jawad 26 February 2018

An amazing and thoughtful poem. I fully agree with the Poet's Notes, but be careful in your writes, you are living in an area, badly affected by religious extremism and terrorism. May Allah protect you from the enemies of humanity!

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Catherine Kennedy 23 May 2015

Truth outweighs hypocrisy .. Your words have beauty. & vision Old eyes new vision Thank you for posting your work.. Your style is remnant of the master himself .. You have such a gift...

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Erica Santana 01 December 2012

good poem well written

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Spreading the right gospel through the right people is the need of the hour. Humanity must thrive on inherited traits and mutual dependence and selfless love. The image of a God invented in the extreme past of laying foundations to human civilization is not the ultimate factor which can correct man`s mindset now. Any religion that lives in the mind of an individual; not a group nor a sect can alone now resurrect the man from this mire.... Thanks a lot for expressing your great thoughts.

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Hazel Durham 11 November 2012

This poem is full of wisdom and truth, love conquers all! !

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