Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 122,630 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

A Doll Of Clay (Being Inspired By Marie Shine's Poem Ecstasy) - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Thanks for relieving me from cares.
I shall wait for you in the next nightmares.
Thanks for relieving me from the pains.
I don't mind your given stains,
The ecstasy that you provide,
is followed by a will to abide
the fatigues of a new and tiring day,
after all I'm a doll of helpless clay!
Embraced in the arms let me forget the misses,
Come on sweetheart it; s a moment of kisses!

(Thanks Marie Shine, your poem is nice and inspiring, and I reacted with a poem.)

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about A Doll Of Clay (Being Inspired By Marie Shine's Poem Ecstasy) by Akhtar Jawad

  • Kelly Kurt (11/27/2015 3:02:00 PM)

    It is a wonderful thing about this site that allows poets to inspire and be inspired (Report) Reply

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/27/2015 12:20:00 AM)

    A superb poem on the life of doll made up of clay......You did it nicely I am yet to read the poem by Marie but after reading your poem I will will definitely read it as well....Thanks for sharing this poem...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (11/26/2015 11:57:00 PM)

    Sentiments based on the life's realities, are beautifully expressed. To carry out the romance of life vis-a-vis our hardships is worth a lifetime of celebration. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 26, 2015

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