A Dream Of Home Poem by Juan Olivarez

A Dream Of Home

Rating: 4.0


This is where I want to be,
where everybody smiles at me.
This stretch of water that winds away,
from west to east and I will say,

If you like fishing this is the place,
to cast your line and slow your pace.
To take in the valley sun,
catching blue -gills by the ton

There's rio-grande perch and bass all around,
sunfish and bluegills and I've even found,
carp and garr all sorts of stuff,
even a big old copperhead in the rough.

I know I am dreaming, but soon I won't be,
and my little stream will be reality,
in McAllen, Texas, it waits patiently,
for me to return, fishing's for me.

4/26/10 29 palms ca.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 23 September 2016

Superb Poem......Nicely written.

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Joseph Anderson 24 April 2012

Just a good old down home write-I hope you haul them in-I enjoyed this.Did you make it?

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Smoky Hoss 20 February 2011

Is'nt it great to know: you have a place, a wonderful place! Very good write here.

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Lynn Glover 29 June 2010

A very good write, Juan and I know that your dream will come true just as I dream of home. Very, Very good. Lynn

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