Juan Olivarez

Silver Star - 3,895 Points (september 12 / nyssa oregon)

A Dream Of Home - Poem by Juan Olivarez

This is where I want to be,
where everybody smiles at me.
This stretch of water that winds away,
from west to east and I will say,

If you like fishing this is the place,
to cast your line and slow your pace.
To take in the valley sun,
catching blue -gills by the ton

There's rio-grande perch and bass all around,
sunfish and bluegills and I've even found,
carp and garr all sorts of stuff,
even a big old copperhead in the rough.

I know I am dreaming, but soon I won't be,
and my little stream will be reality,
in McAllen, Texas, it waits patiently,
for me to return, fishing's for me.

4/26/10 29 palms ca.

Comments about A Dream Of Home by Juan Olivarez

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/23/2016 11:51:00 AM)

    Superb Poem......Nicely written. (Report) Reply

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  • (4/24/2012 2:50:00 PM)

    Just a good old down home write-I hope you haul them in-I enjoyed this.Did you make it? (Report) Reply

  • (2/20/2011 7:33:00 PM)

    Is'nt it great to know: you have a place, a wonderful place! Very good write here. (Report) Reply

  • (6/29/2010 9:16:00 AM)

    A very good write, Juan and I know that your dream will come true just as I dream of home. Very, Very good. Lynn (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 26, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 29, 2010

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