A Dream View Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

A Dream View

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I walked that path a thousand times,
To the mountain top I'd climb,
Leaving the village beneath me,
I'd hear those church bells chime.

Looking down the valley,
The sky a luscious blue,
Admiring this world around me,
A grand and special view.

The village I was born in,
This land I call my own,
The rows of terraced houses,
A community proudly grown.

The birds sing from the treetops,
The sun upon my face,
This is my favourite moment,
This is my special place.

Jayne Louise Davies

A Dream View
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Keith Brown 20 May 2020

Beautiful images and emotive poem, where are you now, ? Still writing tired of PH?

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Jayne Davies 29 April 2013

Thanks for the lovely comment! I will read yours x

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Babatunde Aremu 25 April 2013

I share in this nostalgia. The are early years in the village are always wonderful to remember. This reminds me of my poem: A Song To My Childhood Friends. Thanks for sharing and keep writing

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Jayne Davies 21 April 2013

Thank you David! Glad you like it!

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David Wood 21 April 2013

A lovely poem Jayne with good imagery. I like it.

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