A Facial Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

A Facial

Rating: 5.0


how many of it can i remember
a dark blue in color
not a spec of white any where

a light blue apron wear
with a frill of white clouds everywhere
the radiant yellow adds another color

a brush or canvas i have not here
am not a painter to put this in picture
am not a poet for my words to color

how would i ever remember
a sky so many in number
tomorrow i do not know what is in store....
.......for me up there

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken E Hall 06 July 2009

A poem of colour and wonder of tomorrow, and tomorrow never comes it has already arrived... romantic thanks for the read+++++10 regards

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Indira Babbellapati 05 July 2009

yes, sky has a wealth of surprises...

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Tsira Goge 04 July 2009

tomorrow i do not know what is in store.... ............................................................ Very beautiful a poem, only you do not worry, 'tomorrow' will tell hers word..10.. Tsita

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Catrina Heart 04 July 2009

In this world we do always apply color to anything from our very ownself e.g. face, nails, hair skin...to our words to keep it sweet and romantic, sensitive etc. to our house to make it beautiful and cozy.... A very nice poem written Sam....I loved it indeed.

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~ Jon London ~ 03 July 2009

Beautifully touching piece Sam...You continue to impress me my brother...keep up the great work 10++

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Mubeen Sadhika 25 September 2009

Nature played in your words. Awesome writing. Great narration. Deserves 10++++

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Mamta Agarwal 12 July 2009

amazing transforming patterns of the clouds and sky- fascinating write. some things can only be witnessed not captured and locked in words or paint just a moment in time. very creative poem 10 Mamta

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Marieta Maglas 11 July 2009

''a brush or canvas i have not here am not a painter to put this in picture am not a poet for my words to color'' nice poem...well written...10+++

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Miriam Maia Padua 10 July 2009

behind the sky..their lies our home... very nice piece Sam...very impressive.. very heartwarming thoughts very inspiring...divine and touching flowing with humility... 10+++ lovelots maia

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Bob Blackwell 07 July 2009

Each day our sun rises on a different world.

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