As a leave dropped on his forehead
his vision was simply led
by a carriage on a dusty road
carried a splendor hidden by a coat
Though it was not at all clear,
he was able to catch a glimpse
of a beauty concealed
and hidden and sealed..
He rose from his rest
heartbeat resounded of his chest
he deemed it was his fate
an encounter he has waited
As his mind and eyes clouded and crowded
by magnificence he's never known
the carriage was then averted
faded and dispersed at the line of horizon...
a very beautiful imagery write with the use of strong metaphors....thanks for sharing 10 rgds
Yayyyy! ! this is what i've been waiting for (>_<) hurry and post the next part of the story, I'm looking forward for it (^o^) v *sry for my childish comments ^^'*
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A fairy travelling on the rose petalled road, left on my heart, beautiful memories load......... Wonderful piece.......