A Fresh Journey Poem by Elaine Sept

A Fresh Journey

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Son of the earth and sea and sand,
Dwell not on the trials of yesterday,
Bridges, and tunnels, and barns
Ghostly reflections of passageways and dwellings
And the dark weight of legacy and tradition,
Of yesterday, from the sun and sky.

Today the wind brings a new light upon firm clay.

Gently drift from long history,
Journey slow amid those worried trees,
Ascend the ragged cliffs
Then call upon that breeze that once chilled your front door,
Holding no troubled songs
To announce the gleaming promise yet unfolding.

A Fresh Journey
Sunday, March 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: inspiration
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 27 August 2015

Then call upon that breeze that once chilled your front door, Holding no troubled songs To announce the gleaming promise yet unfolding. the last sentence is so hopeful. A Poetess' vision should be always positive. we are poets who are called to change this world. thank you dear Poetess.

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Ramesh Rai 20 April 2015

Beautiful write expressing spiritual emotions .

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 March 2015

An awesome poem in skillfully penned muse and metaphor. The wording fits poetically in analogy. Thanx 4 yor coments.

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Kelly Kurt 19 March 2015

A lovely offering and a deep thought. Thank you for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 March 2015

Worried trees of the past. Yes, on a new journey. Life is always with the memories of the past.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2017

Fantastic expression. Beautiful poem shared amazingly. Thanks for sharing.10

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Jazib Kamalvi 06 November 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Elaine. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Wayne Kingston 06 March 2016

Too bad you stopped posting. Lovely work.

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 January 2016

This is beautiful poetry. Thanks for sharing.

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Fabrizio Frosini 26 January 2016

Elaine, if interested, you might join our new editorial project: ''POETRY AGAINST INEQUALITY '' LET ME KNOW ************************* POEMS SUBMISSION: - DEADLINE: February 20,2016 - 1 POEM (in English) of maximum 25 lines; - SUBJECT: 'INEQUALITY' as it is described in the OXFAM Report 2016 (released on Jan.18)

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