Sunil Uniyal

(14 January 1953 - / Lucknow / India)

A Ghazal - I Feel Lost

Poem by Sunil Uniyal

I don't know why, it's strange but true-
I feel lost in front of you

Virtues in me are too many,
You take only a bird's eye-view.

What is all this roaming about?
Why is life a wandering Jew?

In this world of tasks undone,
Days are like the morning dew.

Here's a city of millions where,
Uni's been seeking friends few.


Comments about A Ghazal - I Feel Lost by Sunil Uniyal

  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (10/22/2018 4:20:00 AM)

    I don't know why, it's strange but true-
    I feel lost in front of you
    Virtues in me are too many,
    You take only a bird's eye-view.
    All credit to you for such a wonderful poem. Writing Ghazals in English is not an easy task but you have nicely maintained the elegance of this form in your poetry. Thanks for sharing.(Report)Reply

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  • Reshma Ramesh (10/3/2008 3:57:00 AM)

    very very neat indeed(Report)Reply

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (3/6/2008 1:47:00 AM)

    a nice rhyme indeed................(Report)Reply

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  • Vidyadhar ... (3/5/2008 10:51:00 AM)

    Good piece of work with rhymes and rhythm(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 5, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 5, 2008