Sunil Uniyal

(14 January 1953 - / Lucknow / India)

A Ghazal - He And We - Poem by Sunil Uniyal

wind water earth sky - all things remain the same
for our Lord in heaven above we are but a game

He tests us at every step if we fail
not He but we're ourselves to blame

all day the devotees throng His shrine
chanting His name spreading His fame

desires they've sown for ages in their hearts
if they don't sprout won't it be His shame?

deaf He may be to my pleas, uni,
don't think on His love i'll forego my claim.


Comments about A Ghazal - He And We by Sunil Uniyal

  • Ritika George (10/22/2018 12:55:00 PM)


    He tests us at every step if we fail
    not He but we're ourselves to blame

    yeah very much true, Our God is really kind God. We just need to bear fruits to enjoy his glory on us. Thank you so much sir for sharing this poem. I would really like to invite you to read mine. I would be highly obliged. Regards,
    Ritika
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (10/22/2018 12:40:00 PM)


    All things remain the same! !

    Thanks for sharing.
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  • Anil Kumar Panda (10/22/2018 9:20:00 AM)


    Nice poem. Yeah, He is there to take care of us always. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (10/22/2018 4:12:00 AM)


    Lovely poem in Ghazal form. Content-wise also, it is superb.
    Thanks, Dear Friend.
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  • Adrian Flett (10/22/2018 4:08:00 AM)


    A thoughtful and mindful view of God and the need to understand 'he tests us at every step.' (Report) Reply

  • (10/22/2018 2:57:00 AM)


    A thoughtful write of wonderful tones? .......well written (Report) Reply

  • Mahtab Bangalee (10/22/2018 2:54:00 AM)


    nice devoted Ghazal (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/22/2018 2:48:00 AM)


    A fantastic comparison, which makes us think deeply about our existence, Congrats for POD....10++ (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/22/2018 2:18:00 AM)


    Beautiful poem on Earth and Lord having touching expression. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (10/22/2018 1:36:00 AM)


    Such a splendid poem by Sunil Uniyal................... (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (10/23/2008 6:10:00 AM)


    Nicely presented.
    10 with love.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 27, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 12, 2008


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