A Ghazal - He And We Poem by Sunil Uniyal
A Ghazal - He And We
wind water earth sky - all things remain the same
for our Lord in heaven above we are but a game
He tests us at every step if we fail
not He but we're ourselves to blame
all day the devotees throng His shrine
chanting His name spreading His fame
desires they've sown for ages in their hearts
if they don't sprout won't it be His shame?
deaf He may be to my pleas, uni,
don't think on His love i'll forego my claim.
all day the devotees throng His shrine chanting His name spreading His fame desires they've sown for ages in their hearts if they don't sprout won't it be His shame? /// Ghazal in shekwa tone
In a Ghazal themes are usually connected to love and romance. This beautiful Ghazal misses that romance, no? Please, never create such a line, making God as evillish, I cite you here: " for our Lord in heaven above we are but a game" , I do not think so, Sunil Sir. CONGRATULATIONS, Sunil Sir, being chosen as The Modern Poem Of The Day. Hurray! Double Congrats, previous year the same honour, prize and even the date. God´s Blessings.
A thoughtful and mindful view of God and the need to understand 'he tests us at every step.'
THREE: TOP Marks Full for you, Sunil. Enjoyed tremendously.
TWO: and now for the third time on Sunday, October 8. Congratulations on your election as The Modern Poem Of The Day, and remember: man proposes, but God disposes
ONE: your thoughts on God are very thought-provoking for me, Uni. First of all, I would like to congratulate you on your three-time election as Modern Poem of the Day, first in 2018, then in 2019 on the same day, October 22,
The style of expression of faith in God and closeness with Him is superb. A well deserved modern poem of the day.
What a great message in poetic form. It's great to know you recognize the power of our Father. Congratulations on POD,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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deaf He may be to my pleas, uni, don't think on His love i'll forego my claim. .....so impressive. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the modern poem of POD.