A Ghazal - He And We Poem by Sunil Uniyal
A Ghazal - He And We
wind water earth sky - all things remain the same
for our Lord in heaven above we are but a game
He tests us at every step if we fail
not He but we're ourselves to blame
all day the devotees throng His shrine
chanting His name spreading His fame
desires they've sown for ages in their hearts
if they don't sprout won't it be His shame?
deaf He may be to my pleas, uni,
don't think on His love i'll forego my claim.
all day the devotees throng His shrine chanting His name spreading His fame desires they've sown for ages in their hearts if they don't sprout won't it be His shame? /// Ghazal in shekwa tone
In a Ghazal themes are usually connected to love and romance. This beautiful Ghazal misses that romance, no? Please, never create such a line, making God as evillish, I cite you here: " for our Lord in heaven above we are but a game" , I do not think so, Sunil Sir. CONGRATULATIONS, Sunil Sir, being chosen as The Modern Poem Of The Day. Hurray! Double Congrats, previous year the same honour, prize and even the date. God´s Blessings.
Nice poem. Yeah, He is there to take care of us always. Loved it.
2. about the 'poem'. is it worth being called so? or even a ghazal?
This poem was selected poem of the dat (pod) modern on 22 October 2019 and again tioday. As if there are no poems worth the name! I have come to conclude that the poetic standards of PoemHunter is suspect nowadays. I wonder, why am i here!
THREE: TOP Marks Full for you, Sunil. Enjoyed tremendously.
TWO: and now for the third time on Sunday, October 8. Congratulations on your election as The Modern Poem Of The Day, and remember: man proposes, but God disposes
ONE: your thoughts on God are very thought-provoking for me, Uni. First of all, I would like to congratulate you on your three-time election as Modern Poem of the Day, first in 2018, then in 2019 on the same day, October 22,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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deaf He may be to my pleas, uni, don't think on His love i'll forego my claim. .....so impressive. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the modern poem of POD.