Sunil Uniyal

(14 January 1953 - / Lucknow / India)

A Winter Haiku

Poem by Sunil Uniyal

lost in the fog ~
an old man in the street
chanting 'Ram, Ram'.

Comments about A Winter Haiku by Sunil Uniyal

  • Subbaraman N V (3/6/2008 2:03:00 AM)

    Though strictly not conforming to the form, a nice short verse deserving appreciation!(Report)Reply

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  • Leah Nunya (1/3/2008 10:48:00 AM)

    this is not a haiku. your syllable pattern is 4-6-4 a haiku syllable pattern is 5-7-5 smart one. learn poetry before you write it cuz it makes you look stupid.(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 3, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 5, 2008