Jolanta Gradowicz


A Girl At A Bus Stop - Poem by Jolanta Gradowicz

I saw her at the only bus stop
In our little, forbidding town.
She seemed to be on the top -
The girl was getting me down.

I wanted to be just like she –
A young girl of the world
With a hand luggage- so free -
In a bus on the provincial road.

Colorful lights of a big city
Were on the lookout for her.
The bus departed, I felt pity –
I had to remain here forever.

Where are you, girl from the bus?
Where is your destination?
There was a difference between us,
Or... it’s only my imagination...


Comments about A Girl At A Bus Stop by Jolanta Gradowicz

  • (6/25/2008 12:16:00 PM)


    A very creative piece of poetry. The kind of thing that really does serve the reader well. I really recommend this piece. I would have given it a 9 but there is no scoring. It is worth every bit of that.

    GW62
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  • Adeline Foster (12/16/2007 3:33:00 PM)


    Great introspection, well said
    Adeline
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  • (6/12/2007 11:22:00 AM)


    beautiful rhyming poem. I do not know, why I wanted to read it again and again. (Report) Reply

  • (7/20/2006 2:59:00 PM)


    A lovely poem of longing, rich in imagination, touched by a wistfulness that is very appealing to the reader.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra
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  • (6/22/2006 4:14:00 AM)


    i bet she thought the same about you looking at you...in india we say ' the jasmine on the neighbour's creeper smells sweeter than the ones on mine' (Report) Reply

  • (4/27/2006 5:31:00 PM)


    I enjoyed reading your poem. It made me think - how our lives are similar and different but we do share a liking for poetry. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 20, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 4, 2007


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