Deserted by love
In the summertime,
I walk by the river
And speak to seagulls
And feed them my sandwich.
I used to worship the dawn,
But now, I awake alone
In a dreamless home.
I fantasize a departure
To an exotic place
Where I’ll have a new
And lovelier face.
A girl will kiss me
Who doesn’t intend
To make me cry.
Something for which every soul wishes: one who will not bring tears. Nothing so sad, in love, as a dreamless home or spirit - or heart. Wonderful write, Uriah.
Uriah, What a beautiful poem. I enjoy poems that convey timeless experiences in understated, honest ways. I hope you found your girl. love, Alison xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
A girl who intends to and does give you the unconditional love you deserve will throw her arms around you and never stop kissing your sweet face off. That's a guarantee. Hauntingly sad and well penned, uriah. t x
aww...it's so sweet. & i'm wishing a guy will kiss me and not lead me on/stand me up/give me fake phone #'s. Maybe we'll both get what we want... eni da kid
A girl will kiss me Who doesn’t intend To make me cry......../// fantastic verse
I fantasize a departure To an exotic place Where I’ll have a new And lovelier face. A girl will kiss me Who doesn’t intend To make me cry. superb write great 10++++++++++++++++
If you think you're the only boy waiting for the Mrs.Right, think again! I believe what you've written deserves a great deal of credit. Thanks for sharing.
I have read several of your poems and just keep reading.. You have such a raw talent. I know not, how long it is that you have been writing, or even what experience(s) that you draw upon in your life, but you are an amazing poet. Not one so far as I have read from you, is less than perfect. Beautiful Uriah... Moriah
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I would like to translate this poem
exotic piece of creation... Please read my poems and advise.