Vishal Sharma

Gold Star - 5,400 Points (India)

A Glimmer/Ray Of Hope - Poem by Vishal Sharma

Gained the power
to recollect
called my desires

My life full of hopes
that I have caught
into my mighty fist
A very dareful job!

I tried to gain access
with the full might
but oh! No..I lost
my control

I repent
I have lost all the way
But, I am courageous
Not afraid to take risks

The green life
before me
Is breathtaking
just need someone to show

My problems,
just vanished before it
within those rainbowed

I thought
being a star
I might get
up too high above there
I will never get it
Naah! Never
just going to give
an another try

Sitting here,
on the edge of life
I thanked Him, his next
move; determine my destiny

Comments about A Glimmer/Ray Of Hope by Vishal Sharma

  • The chinmay (12/19/2015 2:32:00 PM)

    nice poetry words are used with maturity and poem written by heart (Report) Reply

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  • Vishal Sharma (10/11/2015 4:40:00 AM)

    probably one of my best verses (Report) Reply

  • Musfiq Us Shaleheen (11/4/2013 12:45:00 PM)

    Nicely penned... very well crafted...

    I thanked Him, his next
    move; determine my destiny

    Love THOSE line...
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 17, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 24, 2013

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