A Hawk (Haiku Haiku Haiku Haiku Haiku) Poem by Udiah (witness to Yah)

A Hawk (Haiku Haiku Haiku Haiku Haiku)

Rating: 2.3


The harvest soon comes
A hawk's eye is needed now
Two watching a front

Tuesday, January 31, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Using the eye of a hawk ensure that nothing is missed and very poem need such a tool.

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Bri Edwards 11 February 2013

i could see why someone would rate this a three (3) . but i'm not trying to find fault. reading the other comment, which mentions haiku helps explain. i don't have much experience with haiku, but i don't know that i've ever read one that i did like. but thanks for sharing.....i guess. does it have to do with a pair of hawks hunting? ? i love birds.

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Nurain Ali-balogun 20 September 2012

Haiku uhm? Nicely written.

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