Lost Love (Love Love Love Love Love Love) Poem by Udiah (witness to Yah)

love this poem. It speaks to the heart of those who have lost love in their life or ever had a broken heart. beautiful piece of writing.

Commendable work...Crisp, tightly cropt stanzaic structure enables fluxive structural movement...Suggestion: Consider syllabic attention as to where you are placing your metre emphasis that will enable you to achieve maximized rhythm & a cadence that glides like satin off silk, from the works onset to close-out.. ~FjR~.

love this poem speaks to the tragedy of love

wow good work i love this your poem buddy

I like this poem. Have a good weekend!

I love how you put light into the darkness inside this poem. I write usually darker poetry, but I believe that there is light in the darkness and you exposed that in your poem. I understand your pain. I live it frequently.

Любовь подарок Божественный, И кто её познал, был избранным! , а если сохранил её , прожил не зря! Любовь мир и созидание! ! Без неё холдно и тоскливо!

love this peice, been there myself

Rising back from a heart-shearing loss is not easy. This poem exudes positive energy, in spite of such loss. Great. Well done.

I weep all night for my love gone My heart is sick, for death I long Mine eyes well tears for love that's lost I'll mourn always for the great cost.. Grand me wisdom to see the truths and to go on facing all that may come in my life. tony