Udiah (witness to Yah)

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Lost Love (Love Love Love Love Love Love) - Poem by Udiah (witness to Yah)

Void, empty, hollow inside
My dreams have fled, my hopes have died
Existence has no reason
Life's just passing with each season

She was my life, my hope, my love
All is gone, passed by thereof
The hurt is such no one should bear
What's to life, why should I care?

I weep all night for my love gone
My heart is sick, for death I long
Mine eyes well tears for love that's lost
I'll mourn always for the great cost

But in each day Lord give me hope
Strengthen me so I may cope
Grant me wisdom to help me see
Thy great way and not just me.


















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Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Lost Love (Love Love Love Love Love Love) by Udiah (witness to Yah)

  • (7/17/2018 9:52:00 PM)


    Remarkable piece....truly loved it (Report) Reply

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  • (7/6/2018 2:07:00 AM)


    its a great poem but touching.....but ey it rocks love it (Report) Reply

  • (6/16/2018 10:58:00 AM)


    When his love is gone, he finds himself in the grip of hopelessness and despair. (Report) Reply

  • (5/28/2018 4:01:00 AM)


    Fascinating, heart touching poem.It gives a meaning to life, that when you in love you share common dreams and when love is lost everything you had interest in seize to exist. (Report) Reply

  • (5/23/2018 10:46:00 AM)


    Wonderful (Report) Reply

  • Sylvaonyema Uba (4/17/2018 8:23:00 AM)


    Good rhyme scheme and
    Good use of quatrain.

    With a musical effect.

    SylvaOnyema Uba
    (Report) Reply

  • Rae Seagull (4/2/2018 1:40:00 AM)


    What a touching poem. Loved it (Report) Reply

    (5/28/2018 9:31:00 PM)

    im the poem and your mom was touching me

  • (3/30/2018 11:14:00 PM)


    It maked me cry (Report) Reply

  • Stephanie T Castillo (3/12/2018 1:06:00 AM)


    I wish for love just like that.
    The pain to wish upon none,
    yet wish to be loved just like
    that.
    What a poem.10
    10
    10
    10
    X 10....
    (Report) Reply

  • Yawar Narchoor (2/4/2018 6:10:00 AM)


    this poem has turned me completely speechless lov u man (Report) Reply

  • (1/25/2018 12:56:00 PM)


    This poem sounds great, and I can't wait to share it with my mom! She will love it, although some of the other poems are not good at all. (Report) Reply

  • Abhimanyu Kumar.s (11/21/2017 7:17:00 AM)


    Love beautified but hope it's a true one not the present. (Report) Reply

    (5/28/2018 9:27:00 PM)

    ur mom gaey lol

  • M Sagnik Das (6/4/2017 1:02:00 PM)


    love love love love love love love love
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  • Lopamudra Mishra (5/3/2017 12:43:00 AM)


    Drenched in passion, love, hope and despair, kudos! . (Report) Reply

  • Olusola Francis (12/6/2016 12:34:00 PM)


    wonderful piece, #what love does (Report) Reply

  • Louise Mcgowan (10/20/2016 4:04:00 AM)


    Enjoy reading your poem.Thank You (Report) Reply

  • (11/1/2014 1:16:00 AM)


    It is so disheartening that the guy lost his love, and it is very well expressed here.. It brings out the soul of the person who is/was completely in love... well expressed! ! (Report) Reply

  • (10/13/2014 9:18:00 PM)


    I understand that the guy was in love and that he lost his love, but was he with the girl or was it just a distant love and he never really got to be with the girl from the start. maybe she didn't love him back and he didn't get the courage to ask her out and when he finally did he got the hope to ask her out and found out that she was either dating someone else or wasn't interested in him...maybe that's why he lost all his hope. Im not trying to change the story im just giving my perspective on this poem. There a few things that catch my eye like ok well how is this happening. Love is a strong word and the writer expressed it beautifully...but maybe the person in this poem really wasn't in love to begin with, maybe it was just a feeling and not the whole emotion. (Report) Reply

    (5/28/2018 9:33:00 PM)

    how do you have the time to write out a fudging paragraph about a crappy poem? honestly. go get a job you dissapointment.

  • (5/17/2013 3:37:00 AM)


    Nice one.It sounds sweet (Report) Reply

  • (4/25/2013 10:45:00 PM)


    This is a really nice and sweet poem.! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ^_^ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 11, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 16, 2016


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