The day I first met you
In the morning hours
On a pleasant autumn day
I had none in my sky
None too low, nor so high
In my fresh and innocent eye
while the Sun was rising
In the horizon.
The day I met you next
Just after the dawn
On an auspicious chilly morning
In a temple of Goddess and
You had become my Sun
The centre of my revolutions
From Earth to sky,
Still there was a Sun high
Up in the horizon.
Then I met you again
Just before closing my eyes
On your lap, in the gold rays
In an afternoon of my life
Your lips joined mine
Silently flew the time,
I breathed my last and
Then as I looked around
There was the Sun
In the horizon.
Just before closing my eyes On your lap, in the gold rays In an afternoon of my life Your lips joined mine Silently flew the time, I breathed my last and Then as I looked around There was the Sun In the horizon.
Then I met you again Just before closing my eyes On your lap, in the gold rays In an afternoon of my life madam I love this poem thanks 10++++! ! ! ! +
On your lap, in the gold rays In an afternoon of my life Your lips joined mine Silently flew the time, I breathed my last and thanks madam I absolute love your poem and poem writing so beautiful 10++++++
The day I first met you....to....I breathed my last.... really painful.nice read.8+
Then I met you again Just before closing my eyes On your lap, in the gold rays In an afternoon of my life Great poem, thanks. 10++
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Then I met you again Just before closing my eyes On your lap, in the gold rays In an afternoon of my life Your lips joined mine Silently flew the time, I breathed my last.... It's a rare melancholic song of separation dear Rimi, Keep this debut step progressive..You would end up soon with success.10 marks for this courageous attempt.