A Horizon Poem by Seema Devi Sharma

A Horizon

Rating: 5.0


The day I first met you

In the morning hours

On a pleasant autumn day

I had none in my sky

None too low, nor so high

In my fresh and innocent eye

while the Sun was rising

In the horizon.



The day I met you next

Just after the dawn

On an auspicious chilly morning

In a temple of Goddess and

You had become my Sun

The centre of my revolutions

From Earth to sky,

Still there was a Sun high

Up in the horizon.



Then I met you again

Just before closing my eyes

On your lap, in the gold rays

In an afternoon of my life

Your lips joined mine

Silently flew the time,

I breathed my last and

Then as I looked around

There was the Sun

In the horizon.

A Horizon
Thursday, September 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: death,horizon,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 September 2016

Then I met you again Just before closing my eyes On your lap, in the gold rays In an afternoon of my life Your lips joined mine Silently flew the time, I breathed my last.... It's a rare melancholic song of separation dear Rimi, Keep this debut step progressive..You would end up soon with success.10 marks for this courageous attempt.

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Anita Aparajita Das 16 November 2016

Just before closing my eyes On your lap, in the gold rays In an afternoon of my life Your lips joined mine Silently flew the time, I breathed my last and Then as I looked around There was the Sun In the horizon.

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 17 January 2018

Then I met you again Just before closing my eyes On your lap, in the gold rays In an afternoon of my life madam I love this poem thanks 10++++! ! ! ! +

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 09 January 2018

On your lap, in the gold rays In an afternoon of my life Your lips joined mine Silently flew the time, I breathed my last and thanks madam I absolute love your poem and poem writing so beautiful 10++++++

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 14 November 2017

A beautiful write. Keep up the good work

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Seema Sharma Rimi 02 December 2017

Thank you Sir for these kind words.

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Prabhata Kumar Sahoo 02 October 2017

The day I first met you....to....I breathed my last.... really painful.nice read.8+

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Seema Sharma Rimi 02 December 2017

Thank you Sir for these kind words and inspirations.

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Sanghamitra Nayak 25 September 2017

Then I met you again Just before closing my eyes On your lap, in the gold rays In an afternoon of my life Great poem, thanks. 10++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 02 December 2017

Thank you Sanghamitra for these kind words.

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