My heart has turned
An empty vessel
That can now sound
Much of my past.
I see my friends who ran away
Even the closest did not wait,
For me to take a breathe
And then to start again.
I saw my brothers staying back
While I could proceed
No where in the dark.
Only to try just another road.
Nothing but emptiness do prevail
Befriend me and my soul,
When cloud of despair
start blurring my goal.
Nothing but emptiness do prevail Befriend me and my soul, When cloud of despair start blurring my goal. Nicely penned. Thanks Seema.10++++
My heart has turned An empty vessel That can now sound Much of my past. Beautiful poem, worthy of being awarded 10+++++
It is seen in present society that near, dear, friends, companios, brothers or sisters are often envious when one is in progress and he has to proceed ahead alone. Dear Seema, you have so nicely inscribed this here. Let it be quoted some lines... I saw my brothers staying back While I could proceed No where in the dark. Only to try just another road. Beautiful poem with touching expression. Thanks for sharing.
I see my friends who ran away Even the closest did not wait, For me to take a breathe And then to start again. Beautiful poem dear Rimi... Thanks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I see my friends who ran away Even the closest did not wait, For me to take a breathe And then to start again. Nice poem dear poet. 10+++
Thank you dear for these kind words.