A Selfie Of My Self - 2 Poem by Seema Devi Sharma

A Selfie Of My Self - 2

Rating: 5.0


My heart has turned
An empty vessel
That can now sound
Much of my past.

I see my friends who ran away
Even the closest did not wait,
For me to take a breathe
And then to start again.

I saw my brothers staying back
While I could proceed
No where in the dark.
Only to try just another road.

Nothing but emptiness do prevail
Befriend me and my soul,
When cloud of despair
start blurring my goal.

Friday, September 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship,image,lifestyle,self discovery,selfie
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sanghamitra Nayak 25 September 2017

I see my friends who ran away Even the closest did not wait, For me to take a breathe And then to start again. Nice poem dear poet. 10+++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 02 December 2017

Thank you dear for these kind words.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 25 September 2017

Nothing but emptiness do prevail Befriend me and my soul, When cloud of despair start blurring my goal. Nicely penned. Thanks Seema.10++++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 02 December 2017

Thank you Mam for these kind words.

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Sabita Sahoo 05 September 2017

My heart has turned An empty vessel That can now sound Much of my past. Beautiful poem, worthy of being awarded 10+++++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 02 December 2017

Thank you Sabita for these kind words.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2017

It is seen in present society that near, dear, friends, companios, brothers or sisters are often envious when one is in progress and he has to proceed ahead alone. Dear Seema, you have so nicely inscribed this here. Let it be quoted some lines... I saw my brothers staying back While I could proceed No where in the dark. Only to try just another road. Beautiful poem with touching expression. Thanks for sharing.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 02 December 2017

Thank you Sir for these kind words. Seema

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Anita Aparajita Das 17 August 2017

I see my friends who ran away Even the closest did not wait, For me to take a breathe And then to start again. Beautiful poem dear Rimi... Thanks.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 02 December 2017

Thank you Didi for these kind words.

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