A Selfie Of My Self - 4 Poem by Seema Devi Sharma

A Selfie Of My Self - 4

Rating: 5.0


I'm just a cloud
Wandering in the sky
In quest of a place
Where I can stay.

No where on this planet
Ever do I see,
A place so warm and
Cosy to welcome me.

I hate myself
Because I'm straight
I'm but a daisy
In the noiseless desert.

Nothing except sand
Surrounds me
Friend have long
Gone from me.

Chilly at night,
Hot at day,
Sand doesn't burn
Grief does slay.

Friday, September 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: friends,friendship,lifestyle,self discovery,selfie
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 September 2016

Nothing except sand Surrounds me Friend have long Gone from me. Chilly at night, Hot at day, Sand doesn't burn Grief does slay. Beautiful poem with a good sense of poetry. Hatred kills. Keep away from it.10 for the poem. Subhas

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 March 2018

With a sweet flow the poem spills your emotion in a beautiful way. Loved it.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 09 October 2017

A drop of tear dries up in such loneliness.Nice poem After Summer Winter comes.Hope is the cool breeze.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 07 December 2017

Thank you revered Sir for these kind words. Thanks for the inspirations.

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Sanghamitra Nayak 25 September 2017

I'm just a cloud Wandering in the sky In quest of a place Where I can stay. Great poem Didi, Nicely penned. 10++++for it.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 07 December 2017

Thank you Mitra for these kind words. Thanks for the inspirations.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 15 September 2017

A Simple poem with lots of expressions.Life is all about knowing oneself more than the world. Keep up the good work.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 02 December 2017

Thank you Sir for these kind words. Thanks for the inspirations.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 15 September 2017

A Simple poem with lots of expressions. Keep up the good work.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 07 December 2017

Thank you Abhimanyu Sir for these kind words. Thanks for the lovely inspirations.

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