A Horse On Loose Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Horse On Loose

Rating: ★5.0


Big thunder rumbles
Lightning flashing many times
Horse on loose runs wild.


Copyright 2017, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Saturday, January 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: animal,horse,rights,rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 14 May 2020

I don't remember a haiku being chosen as poem of the day before, but this certainly is a good one and well-deserving of the choice! Congratulations, Rose Marie!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 May 2020

Let me congratulate you once again for this insightful there liner being selected as Poem of the Day!

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Khairul Ahsan 14 May 2020

A beautiful juxtaposition of images! A perfect haiku. Heartiest congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

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Sandra Feldman 14 May 2020

Panic and fear Described In three unforgettable Lines, Powerfully, Vivid and clear! When blessed pens write. Poetry takes flight Thank you and congratulation, dear Rose Marie.

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 May 2020

Big thunder rumbles Lightning flashing many times Horse on loose runs wild. beautiful dear Rose Marie.... as always you deserve a great 10. to ny.. congrats..

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Soran M. H 01 October 2026

part2 sound and light accompanying the unbridled horse. The poetry functions through metaphor, avoiding the trap of literal, expository language that would steer the work away from its artistic essence. Well done on this beautiful and dazzling piece.

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Soran M. H 01 October 2026

part 1 Brief yet possessing immense poetic value—thunder and lightning,

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Rob Lamberton 10 January 2023

Horses are powerful…thunder and lightning are good metaphors for wild eyed horse on the loose!

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Nabakishore Dash. 01 October 2021

I am amazed by your deep imagery.Really great you are.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 January 2021

Horse on loose runs wild....I can capture the picture!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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