I sought to woo
You
Just by a coo,
Before I flew
Out of your view!
You gave me only two
Astonished looks in lieu!
Dhaka
25 August 2020
A well rhyming poem is amazingly shared here. Appreciated. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks to you too, @Kumarmani Mahakul, for reading and commenting.
@Valsa George, 'naughty'? Yes, perhaps that's the right word! Thanks for calling it cute and sweet as well, and for the generous rating.
@Mahtab Bangalee, Thanks for visiting my poem and leaving a comment here.
Ohhhh. Wo cute and beautiful poem. Loved the rhyming. Compliments for this lovely poem Ahsan jii.
@Aarzoo Mehek, Thanks a lot for your spontaneous appreciation! So much inspired to see my short poem achieve so big an appreciation from you!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Let that heart flutter.
@Lyn Paul, What a beautiful comment in just four words! Thank you.