# A Hurt - Senryu Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# A Hurt - Senryu

Rating: 5.0


nothing will be same
no more of fun and frolic
heard (hurt) from a loved one

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakesh Bedi 29 June 2009

..... heard(hurt) does a wonderful job, friend!

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Priyanka Bhowmick 29 June 2009

loved the last line...

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Smiley Hooker 12 July 2009

Don't worry Sam, I'm not here to hurt you...just having fun reading you. Well done! : -)

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rago rago 08 July 2009

a good thing reading about hurt.........well said...........

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Sandra Martyres 04 July 2009

Nice Senryu...quite original Samanyan...the last line is great.

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Carol Gall 29 June 2009

sad to be hurt nice senryu

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Catrina Heart 29 June 2009

well described senryu!

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