A(I) 'Words, Poem by James McLain
A(I) 'Words,
Did (I) tell on you?
NO!
Never tell on yourself, tell) it(to me, your (I) in you.
Did you wait, listen, think (I) have some thing to say? (I) don't.
Say it often, does it change, the intention, the core that is you?
Give) it(away, much of, (I) many, maids never wait on me, (I) them.
Literally, Must (I) tell on the two of you? ..NO! ..you are safe.
Wordless, then) it(is, that (I) am, only then.Are you safe.
Tomorrow, yes you know, somebody else could (I) be?
Wordless) It(is then (I) need not need be.Need did not change (I) .
A word that was said (I) you did not hear from my mouth(I) have not told, have you? NO! you haven't either (I) know.
(I) need you baby (I) need you ohhh God how (I) need you.
(I) (I) (I) do..(I) do....any thing....any thing...(I) ..blush
) I(wait ever so patiently, to love you at your feet..this you have heard so you now know, so you to can as well, know, (I) ...your feet are beautiful to me....will you not rub on me more, with them..?
yeah, you are forming your style, I think, special formation. and thank you for commenting on Swans for Life.
Clever. Whatever it is, the end line reminds me of whatever song it is that says 'Have Itold you lately that I love you'.... and for a reader to relate a piece to another piece has got to be a good thing. t x
Dear, You are too clever to keep up with... I can´t follow some things... I´m not that smart, and my command of the English language isn´t good enough, though, I dare to dropp you some lines... I don´t know what you really mean by ' feet ' in the end of your poem... From what I gather, feet is the perfect place for love to flow... If men washed one another´s feet... Your wit speaks a lot... your personality speaks more than your words... You master the text in such a way that the words seem to be your servants...
A very different formation indeed...I enjoyed your collowquial narrative poetic expressions...thanks see you ///cheers
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4/24/2024 4:36:34 PM # 1.0.0.1119
best write........i love a good confession.......... thank you for your kind sharing.