A Look At Life-64 Poem by Smrui Ranjan Mohanty

A Look At Life-64

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A LOOK AT LIFE-64
BY-SMRUTI RANJAN MOHANTY

DEATH A MENTAL STATE

When it seems all over
Life sprouts
From the ashes of the past once more
Only you need a bit of silence to feel it
A bit of science, a bit of art to realise it
A pair of eyes to see it,acknowledge
Its never-ending beauty and grandeur
A pair of ears to listen to the symphony of life
And lose yourself in its music forever

Look around
Where is death?
It is only life everywhere
Life and its changing colours
Each more bright and beautiful than the other
Atoms and molecules bubbling with vitality
Energy in various forms
Subtle vibrations
Electrons orbiting around the nucleus
Even what you call death
Is life in another form
Death is more a state of mind
Than a physical phenomenon
One who has not seen life in death
Has never lived his life.

It depends on how you define life
It is an urge to expand, manifest, unfold,
Contract and expand
To keep pace with change and maintain
Its existence under all circumstance
It is an urge to live and transform
That differentiates living from the dead
When you lose that urge
You are dead when still alive
Other than this there is no other death
Where one is completely annihilated
Without becoming anything else.

Keep that urge alive
That will never let you die
You will see the beauty of life in death
It isjust a transition to take you from
One state of consciousness to another
From one station to the other
On the eternal journey of life
With a vibrant body and new lease of life

Smruti Ranjan Mohanty©

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A Look At Life-64
Wednesday, October 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 29 October 2020

A well penned poem of the day. Truly brilliant and impressive...5 stars*****

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 October 2020

When it seems all over Life sprouts From the ashes of the past once more Only you need a bit of silence to feel it A bit of silence to feel. lovely. tony

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Deluke Muwanigwa 29 October 2020

I am alive i am alive. Great poem. Thsts true. Poets never die

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 October 2020

Even what you call death Is life in another form Death is more a state of mind Than a physical phenomenon One who has not seen life in death Has never lived his life.../// wow super standard writings about the death; thought provoking poem about the death and life; congrats for being selected such beautiful poem as POD; it deserves really 5*******

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 October 2020

A brilliant poem! Wonderful second stanza. Many congratulations for this excellent poem being chosen as Poem of the Day!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 October 2021

Life sprouts From the ashes of the past once more Only you need a bit of silence to feel it A bit of science, a bit of art to realise it.....beautiful expression! Many congratulation! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 October 2021

Keep that urge alive That will never let you die You will see the beauty of life in death Congratulations being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, Sir! 5 Stars full

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Nabakishore Dash 29 October 2021

Superb.

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Khairul Ahsan 29 October 2020

'Death is more a state of mind Than a physical phenomenon' - a point to ponder! Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 October 2020

HOW DO YOU KNOW WHEN DEAD LIFE JUST GOES READ MY POEMS YOU WILL KNOW MOMS SMILES WILL MAKE YOU WISE WE ONLY LIVE OUR LIVES LONG

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