'Found-old ring'
Someone out there is lost without a ring...
That to another one meant everything
Didn't it match? didn't it fit?
It is gone-did it ever exist?
The jewels that lay scattered over the floor
The barehanded people cannot endure...
The anguish
Of reducing such sentiment
To the lever of littered pavement
Where eyes casting downward must look to see
The intimation deserted lately
Each symbol makes further testimony
In the trial of what was meant to be...
Who found it?
Let me meet the one who knew its meaning
Because I suspect the recovering
Was not fortune-nor coincidence
Nor the just act of Providence
But that one who possesses it in fact
Was the one who I gave to and took it back...
The hope that it meant anything has left
With the article stolen in the theft
But I can't stop searching again...
Anymore,
Than I can believe it never happened
The emotion rests now with conviction
A life sentence of that consecration...
COPY WRITE©2009
wow... Reading this reminds me of not so long ago.. A ring was made... and given to the girl I love... (still love..) and it just made me wonder... nice poem written.. :)
A lost ring found out is always pleasure and adds rich experience to cherish the loss suffered turning your to be a memorabilia.Tenner.
Very impressive writing. Careful, mature. An allegory, masterfully given. I am glad I read of you, my friend, 'Alma Mater Rhodium Ring', my poetic answer. Thank you for your comments.
A lost ring found....... a sign of Love........ Really really... Good poem.........
Your poems look like mine.Thanks.Go on writing.I have translate a fomus turkish poem Orhan Veli KANIK Listening to İ stanbul..eyes close.I send it to a poet in my messages.Find and read it if youcan
[Jay] Perfect Poem! I don't know about other people's comment, but In my opinion I interpret this poem as someone trying to find the perfect love and makes her wear the (wedding?) ring he found. A girl managed to wear the ring, but in the end gave him it back. And believes he will never find the the one. Full of emotions! 10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a lost ring found = reliving the past memories....so well depicted through resonating expressions! !