A Naked Language Poem by Romeo Della Valle
A Naked Language
The heart is deceived by a muted tongue
That is bound by captivity...
A feeble voice- Uncertain wrong
Is divested of word's gravity...
Let my silence be stripped of a story,
A naked language barely heard,
Below the surface a deeper need
Damns the mind which bridges no word...
I told of nothing at all when I called,
So imprisoned was I by fear
That if I saw an open door
I would not trust it not to disappear...
The walls around have been tightly closing,
Pressing out the air from my lungs
Trapping myself within a building
Slowly vanishing from the horizon...
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Word's gravity.... congrats on being picked... a highest 10+++++++
The helpless men suffocating in a vacuum, speaking where there is no medium to transform there speech in sound waves that can propagate. A perfect selection as members poem of the day, congrats.
a powerful write of feelings felt when in fear? ...........well written.
My dear friend, you are a great poet. The poem is very touchy. The sentiments are very poignant. Your description is very effective. Loved to read. Thanks for sharing.....
An amazing naked language is barely heard from heart's beat. A muted tongue observes the captivity. Slowly vanishing from the horizon pressed air gives here breath. This is really very interesting sharing. An amazing poem this is. Congratulations! ..10
The silence and solitude illustrated with a balanced way to imagine the language of subconscious. Nice catch. Thanks.
Out of the imprisonment of fear surfaced this elegant and profound poem. Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!
Heart is hard pressed for want of words to say in a naked and open way! It is human experience in life sure, my friend! congratulations for your Poem of the Day!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/4/2024 9:01:58 AM # 1.0.0
A muted tongue! ! Thanks for sharing.