Once you were the moon
And I was the sun,
I was a gardener
And you a beautiful rose...
You were the diamond
And I was the ring...
Two bodies, one soul
Great moments we shared
And I still recall...
The time we spent together
Was not a waste of time at all...
For one reason or another,
Love became a game,
Strategies were not exchanged
Since it was just your game
You tried to drive me insane
But little did you know
Things drastically have changed
For, I am far from being the same...
Now, we are heading some where
But not on the same lane...
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a love, s game never ends. its memmory will haunt you. a wonderful poem. voted10 surya
What a relationship, going to the gutter I supposed. Well penned 10+
Since it was just your game You tried to drive me insane But little did you know Things drastically have changed For, I am far from being the same... Now, we are heading some where But not on the same lane... Fantastic lines; full of rythm and rhyme...I simply loved its flow and the meanigfullness that you convey very assertively in this poem..10/10
Two hearts, like lovers meet...coincidentally, from the start. Until a spark of a togetherness shared and undeniably dependent on one another. For one a game! For the other, a repeated need. Nice work, Romeo.
Once you were the moon And I was the sun, I was a gardener And you a beautiful rose... You were the diamond And I was the ring... Two bodies, one soul The start seems right I thought you did find the One! ..for..true love..I thnk I need not to expect but give!
Warm, captivating and completely writing.Many memorable lines in this one. Poetry is certainly in your blood. Thank you for sharing.Mari.
Great poem - touch of sadness in an otherwise sweet poem. Reality can ruin fantasy. Close to my heart right now. Thanks for sharing
i find it so close to hearts great work mister romio keep it up 10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Fabulous written poem of love's game! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10++++++++++