A Love's Comparison Poem by Romeo Della Valle

A Love's Comparison

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Oh, let it rot!
Who's going to want it now,
In that condition?
It was once a delicacy
But look- it's spoiled!

We should get rid of it
As soon as possible
Throw it away
Far, far away
Bury it if you can...

The traces will no linger
More than a few days or hours...
We will replace it easily
At the super-market...

Each season
Brings a new variety
Freshly harvested crops
Rosy with sunshine
Waiting their turn...


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blakk Heart 11 January 2010

An analogy to a dating meat market? -perfect! loved it!

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 10 December 2009

amazing.... Your writing is good. The poem is good. Thanks for sharing. Advanced Merry Christmas and a happy new year! If there are poems you want me to read, please tell me anytime. Thanks!

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