Romeo Della Valle

Rookie - 295 Points (Ageless / Dominican Republic)

A Love's Comparison - Poem by Romeo Della Valle

Oh, let it rot!
Who's going to want it now,
In that condition?
It was once a delicacy
But look- it's spoiled!

We should get rid of it
As soon as possible
Throw it away
Far, far away
Bury it if you can...

The traces will no linger
More than a few days or hours...
We will replace it easily
At the super-market...

Each season
Brings a new variety
Freshly harvested crops
Rosy with sunshine
Waiting their turn...


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Comments about A Love's Comparison by Romeo Della Valle

  • (1/11/2010 10:36:00 PM)


    An analogy to a dating meat market? -perfect! loved it! (Report) Reply

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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (12/10/2009 2:48:00 AM)


    amazing....


    Your writing is good. The poem is good. Thanks for sharing. Advanced Merry Christmas and a happy new year! If there are poems you want me to read, please tell me anytime. Thanks!
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 9, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, October 29, 2012


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