'Weeds Of Sin' Poem by Linda Winchell

'Weeds Of Sin'

Rating: 4.2


Everyday I try to pull a little more
Of those weeds that pop up in my life.
Not knowing how they all got there
It seems… of endless dredge and strife.

Their roots go deep and hold on tight
Deep beneath… the soil of my skin.
Even though some have flowers disguise
They are still… my weeds of sin.

No matter how I try to kill them myself
They keep on coming back.
Until I go to God in prayer for forgiveness
And ask Him to give them all a whack!

By: Linda Winchell
Copyright: 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 29 July 2016

Fantastic poem. Congrats on poem of the day. Well-written, indeed.

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Deva De Silva 29 July 2016

soil of my skin is lovely. A good read!

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Rajnish Manga 29 July 2016

Have complete faith in God and seek His blessings to ensure a life full of righteousness: .....my weeds of sin./ No matter how I try to kill them myself / They keep on coming back.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 29 July 2016

Sins, as we see, are wrong things one commits. Admitting one's own wrongs is the first step towards a sinless life. Quite philosophical poem, excellently worded in well rhymed rhythm, achieves well deserved positioning. Congrats for being the POD.

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Wilma De Guzman 29 July 2016

Wow so good and well written!

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Rob Lamberton 19 January 2023

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Khairul Ahsan 29 July 2018

Loved the title of the poem. Congratulations on this poem's selection as the Member Poem of the Day! 'Even though some have flowers disguise They are still… my weeds of sin.' - Loved these two lines particularly, for their inner meaning.

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Rajnish Manga 29 July 2018

Not knowing how they all got there They are still… my weeds of sin. Being human means we have to live with certain imperfections or weaknesses or 'weeds of sins'. You have nicely dealt with the subject and asked for divine help to root out these 'sins'. Thanks & Congrats, Linda.

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Kim Barney 29 July 2018

Nicely done, Linda. Congrats on poem of the day!

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Savita Tyagi 29 July 2018

Lovely poem. Enjoyed reading. Prayers work when all else fails.

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Linda Winchell

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Chicago Illinois
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