Lawrence S. Pertillar

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A Love To Hate - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Is it getting clearer...
For those who fear to be themselves.
They who have entertained disrespect,
To the point where none is left.
Inspected in depth...
Or quests requested!

Blinded they are like fools on crack!
Using tools of fools to keep themselves back.
Blinded they are like fools on crack.
Or a black cat who can't stop giving 'bad' vibes,
An image to attack!
Blinded they are like fools on crack!
Seeking a shoulder to cry on...
And a pat on their backs!
Blinded they are like fools on crack.
Trying in doped slickness,
But losing themselves...
With weakened backbones attacked!

Is it getting clearer...
For those who fear to be themselves.
With a fear that endears them,
With a love to hate!
Berating unappreciated wisdom at stake!


Comments about A Love To Hate by Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • (10/27/2009 12:54:00 PM)

    Please read my Poems:
    Why Hack My She [In Elite 500]
    Enigmatic Navel or others.
    niv

    Haters are jellied.
    Lovers are spined.
    Excellent poem.
    Ten+++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

    Please read my Poems:
    Why Hack My She [In Elite 500]
    Enigmatic Navel or others.
    niv
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  • Ershad Mazumder (9/29/2008 10:34:00 PM)

    Love and hate are two faces of one coin. Unknowns are not loved or hated.Thanks for this piece dear lawrence. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/19/2008 7:38:00 AM)

    an eyeopener poem for one and all (Report)Reply

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  • (7/4/2008 12:24:00 PM)

    What u said was no lie. good (Report)Reply

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  • (6/13/2008 9:51:00 PM)

    this is described in a beautiful way. i see this everyday in my community. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/8/2008 7:21:00 PM)

    great poem...soo very true! (Report)Reply

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  • (2/23/2008 9:48:00 AM)

    I personally really liked this one...
    I agree with the other comment that this poem is not entiry or necessarily about crack...
    It sabout the refusal to accept ones identity and seeing the beauty in the individuality of people...
    Very strong...
    Beautiful work...
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  • (11/30/2006 11:29:00 PM)

    Much can be read in this poem. Many, many interpretations - but I do not think it is really about 'crack' - but about fanaticism and refusal to see. - Will (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 20, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 24, 2010


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