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A Man's Love

Rating: 5.0

A poetess can be wasteful when it comes to love.
She'll wade and wallow
through the waterfalls below and above.
She'll sip big for ability's sake and swallow.

Like a sponge, not dripping a drop,
she'll dip into resources, diving deeper,
Never noticing what she's got
She'll take all and label each a keeper.

A man's love is like water.
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Ashraful Musaddeq 15 September 2008

A nice poem, the last stanza is wonderful. My 10 with it.

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Ivor Hogg 31 May 2008

clear exposition of the truth M lady but not universally true real love may lose the flames of passion but the fire always burns

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Paul Buttigieg 26 May 2008

You are a clever writer but try and remember one thing Colette, good poems do not contain spelling errors, this is the first thing you need to fix. Foutain and Thristy..........simple errors but if you love writing then love your reader and spell properly. The reader when they love your writing believes you are talented but when they see simple spelling errors they lose faith in your motivation

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Andrew Blakemore 29 April 2008

Beautiful words Colette, great write. Best wishes, Andrew

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Linda Weischedel 23 December 2007

I absolutley loved this poem Colette! Great job. Always, Linda

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Adeline Foster 22 August 2007

What a lovely lesson you paint when all is said and done. A poetess should never be wasteful when it comes to love. Adeline

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David Dennis 29 July 2007

Sweet little poem.... I really like that one.

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