A Message To Teen Aged Students Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Message To Teen Aged Students



I know, I know, the night after a romantic evening!
I listened to the call of aurora while she talked with me
Listened to the music of sea winds when she walked with me
I am glad, she fulfilled her promise of a fantastic evening.
She watched the full moon with her hand in my hand
Her head was on my arms and mine on the sand.

The day after tomorrow, start my annual assessments,
Words and lines of the book appear as her smiling face
I am dreaming and studying her charms and her grace
In the name of love, get out my instinctive sentiments
Leave me alone for studying how the stars are conquered
Romance is attractive but at the moment it may be deferred.

After plucking a diamond for her pink and artistic ring finger,
Next time, I shall meet her not only with my empty hands,
All will witness, the moon, the sea and the pleasing sands,
Tonight leave me alone as we leave an uncalled stranger,
I shall watch the full moon, with a blue diamond ring,
Love is a melodious song and she'll teach me how to sing.

Every month there is a full moon, starry nights come after every day,
I am a student, I have to study and rise and grow as a handsome man,
Time is precious my dreams, let me do something whatever I can,
A smiling parting kiss will make me a stone from the melting clay,
Promise many kisses to her dreams from hairs to eyes and eyes to chin,
Ahead is a cut throat competition, life is a difficult war I have to win.

Sunday, September 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: romance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 09 September 2018

I know a number of teenaged students. Advice is often politely received, but experience is more often heeded.

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 September 2018

ow nicely penned on romantic sense - ///// but Teen comes to buy flower for making love with sweet sense of life. Self coyness mind makes all blush for slight mat. (Ninette)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2018

An absolute message to the teen aged students has been astutely and touchingly delineated. The last Stanza is.much impressive and didactic. Thank u dear Jawad sir.

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Bharati Nayak 12 September 2018

Romance and exams of life superbly juxtaposed. A wonderful poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 September 2018

I have composed many poems for the teens they think I am mad go ahead and don't blink when the girl has been inked the guys flunk gals seemingly get sunk then they come running to me see what he's done I said I am blind now then you were when I warned you All want to learn that a flame can burn only when their finger is placed in the candle flame Since then I have stopped warning teens they say oldy go we know

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 September 2018

A beautiful poem with a unique theme and meaningful message. A vivid and lovely portrayal of a romance usually experienced by teen aged strudents. Liked the last stanza, it conveys a great advice. Superbly penned.10+++

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