Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 54,200 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

A Mind That Is Alive - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

It has been hindered by you.
Splintered.
And the spirits are here to mend.
Everything about it will be tossed on its end.
Until its corrected.
And you can bet it will be done!
Under the power of the Moon, Stars and Sun
You are going to witness it!
This upheavel that takes a shift.
To restore before your eyes with surprise.
Earth, indeed, is a mind that is alive!
And it knows...
It has been taken too much for granted.
And it has allowed us to sit too long,
In self destruction!
Disrupting its peacefulness,
It wishes and can give!


Comments about A Mind That Is Alive by Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • (6/14/2010 10:53:00 AM)


    Master Mind…watcher and feeler of every thing…but we idiots fail to give recognition to it… And you can bet it will be done! ’ yea…ditto to it…
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10
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  • (8/24/2008 4:15:00 AM)


    A very nice piece awaken my mind.

    best regards,
    joan d.h.
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  • (7/21/2008 8:39:00 AM)


    true words...a mind that is alive is watching...patience need not have a 'heavenly' limit...be all it may earthy... enchanting write 10 (Report) Reply

  • (7/9/2008 1:36:00 AM)


    a beautiful poem, mind stirring (Report) Reply

  • (4/27/2008 11:35:00 AM)


    I think that we are taking poetry to step two, the looking beyond our present state
    All can be such healing
    Lawrence, , , Thankyou

    Love duncan X
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  • (4/15/2008 3:11:00 AM)


    Thank you for expressing an idea of a conscious entity which tolerates us. If it writes poetry I will be fulfilled.... Rgds, Ivan (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 15, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 15, 2008


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