A Mind That Is Alive Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

A Mind That Is Alive

Rating: 4.1


It has been hindered by you.
Splintered.
And the spirits are here to mend.
Everything about it will be tossed on its end.
Until its corrected.
And you can bet it will be done!
Under the power of the Moon, Stars and Sun
You are going to witness it!
This upheavel that takes a shift.
To restore before your eyes with surprise.
Earth, indeed, is a mind that is alive!
And it knows...
It has been taken too much for granted.
And it has allowed us to sit too long,
In self destruction!
Disrupting its peacefulness,
It wishes and can give!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Donn Carswell 15 April 2008

Thank you for expressing an idea of a conscious entity which tolerates us. If it writes poetry I will be fulfilled.... Rgds, Ivan

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 14 June 2010

Master Mind…watcher and feeler of every thing…but we idiots fail to give recognition to it… And you can bet it will be done! ’ yea…ditto to it… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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A very nice piece awaken my mind. best regards, joan d.h.

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Kesav Easwaran 21 July 2008

true words...a mind that is alive is watching...patience need not have a 'heavenly' limit...be all it may earthy... enchanting write 10

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Chitra - 09 July 2008

a beautiful poem, mind stirring

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Duncan Wyllie 27 April 2008

I think that we are taking poetry to step two, the looking beyond our present state All can be such healing Lawrence, , , Thankyou Love duncan X

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