A Minute Poem by Ellis Parker Butler

A Minute

Rating: 3.1


She plucked a blossom fair to see;
Upon my coat I let her pin it;
And thus we stood beneath the tree
A minute.

She turned her smiling face to me;
I saw a roguish sweetness in it;
I kissed her once;—it took, maybe,
A minute.

The time was paltry, you’ll agree;
It took but little to begin it;
But since my heart has not been free
A minute.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rafael Cazares 24 September 2013

The poem was excellent as I started to begin it. Thoroughly amused as I finished, I realized all it took was a minute.

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Liliana ~el 24 September 2013

A minute... The intensity and possessive powers of love!

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Madhabi Banerjee 26 December 2016

execellent writing. a minute valuable.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 March 2024

I do not see my comments yet, once again here: ONE: the central theme revolves around the fleeting nature of time and the profound impact a brief moment can have on our life. I do not see my comment yet

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 March 2024

TWO: the poet experiences a transformative event that lingers in their heart long after the physical act has passed

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Bri Edwards 01 December 2024

*** OXYMORON: [[ UNLIKE myself, who is only a moron ]] An oxymoron is a figure of speech that combines two words or phrases with opposite meanings to create a new idea or meaning' bri

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Bri Edwards 01 December 2024

I say that 'a roguish sweetness' is (or almost is) an oxymoron ***. Agree? Well, maybe it is better than NO SWEETNESS! ! ? (CONT.)

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Bri Edwards 01 December 2024

roguish: ro·guish /ˈrōɡiSH/ adjective 'characteristic of a dishonest or unprincipled person.' (cont.)

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Femi Ogunlude 22 May 2024

A decoration of love promptly repaid by a minute long kiss: and afterwards probably with a loving that'll last a lifetime. A less than a minute good read. read.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 May 2024

A very clever worded poem of fleeting moments.TOP Marks 5 Stars!

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Ellis Parker Butler

Ellis Parker Butler

Muscatine / Iowa / United States
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