A Missing Angel Poem by Romeo Della Valle

A Missing Angel

Rating: 4.7


An angel from heaven narrowly escaped,
And now is peacefully resting in my nest...
She has long and thin streaming hairs,
And her passionate love with me, she shares...

With big rounded eyes without any marks,
Beautifully, like diamonds, they spark...
With a body as soft as a baby's skin,
Which makes me think of a classical violin...

Possessed by a unique scent like a flower,
She stands, elegantly tall, like a tower...
Bewitched by her tender voice caressing my ears,
I feel loved and vanished are all my fears...

Describing my real emotions in simple words,
I suspect that really worried is the Lord,
Since I am with the angel from heaven missing,
And definitely, I find her company so pleasing...

Forgive me my dear Lord!
But I don't want to let her go!


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Beckham 05 September 2010

Such a pleasant poem. the rhythm just sweeps you away! thanks for sharing

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Woo Who 07 September 2010

Nice poem, especially the perfect and fluent flow, it was a pleasure reading it, and it really makes u wonder why u dont have such a angel with you...sent u a message, check out,

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Thomas Foreman 13 August 2011

+10 indeed! Keep it up, let your words flow... :)

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Yoseph Lupu 01 August 2011

Your poem, is very amusing, very very.....!

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R Stansfield 23 July 2011

It's funny how a violin can be such a good comparison. Brilliant Brilliant poem, I'll be reading again.

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Eric Ekinde 13 July 2011

hey, Romeo its actually very interesting when we are loved especially by an angel.It a great piece and am sure God himself will like it and wont worry much to take his missing angel home cos she loving you takes ur fears away and God wanting you happy will let her stay. kip on broda, i like the music in it, it brings the touch of the angels violin

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Blue Myne 28 September 2010

hey, bro.... your poem is more awesome than mine..... your great... actually i have noticed that most of your poem is dedicated to a girl... is your girl? ? ? ? ?

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