Connor Whyte

A Monster And A Revolver

Sitting in the cold night, Watching the moonlight waiting for the change of the monster to shift its form, Burning and aching as the form begins to shape. As it stands in the open with eyes red as the sun, It howls to the moon and cries in the night.

Heat of the skin and fur drenched in blood, And rain, Quickly it moves to a person unaware, Making its move on the next prey it finds. A lonely man stands in the road eyes black as stone, Rain bounces of his dark rain coat. He is a easy target but is not alone.

He sees me and he begins to make a stand as my muscles begin to clench to let out a large roar, I feel the heat of my breath and make a move.

He moves so fast my eyes do not follow as I began to choke and throb as a bullet comes from the mans revolver. A extreme pain knocks me down cold. He was never alone as he has a gun faster than the wolf.

This vision comes from my own mind and I lay in my bed feeling the wolfs pain. My eyes turn red and claws extend I howl to the moon and cry to the night. Running down the road I see a man and will make my attempt to feed as he is alone, I will fight all my pain away when I take hold of this mans throat, But is he alone? I will not know.

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 22, 2012
Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 4, 2012

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This is a real experience I have had but wish to not detail it by the way it really went.
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  • Didith Marcelo (1/5/2014 2:13:00 PM)

    Very well! Nice poem keep it up!

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  • Mandi JuneMandi June (1/1/2013 7:38:00 PM)

    Very well written poem! A beautiful, descriptive, short write that captures the reader immediately... Very well Done :)

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  • Barbara NixonBarbara Nixon (12/13/2012 4:40:00 PM)

    Awesome poem, beautifully written and great imagery.

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  • Rachel StreekRachel Streek (7/1/2012 11:31:00 AM)

    Such a great poem I loved reading it. Such great idea for a poem what's your inspiration?

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  • The Devils GirlThe Devils Girl (4/1/2012 6:58:00 PM)

    Omg i love this so much i can see everything your talking about and i love it

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  • Alexis BrockAlexis Brock (3/23/2012 7:29:00 PM)

    i think its awesome :)

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  • Holly MajorsHolly Majors (3/20/2012 6:53:00 PM)

    I think it was a very good poem and i will certainly show it to my friend, it has her name written all over it! :)

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