*** A Moon Of Love -Haiku *** Poem by ANJALI SINHA

*** A Moon Of Love -Haiku ***

Rating: 4.9


Moon in satin while veil
sees reflection in groom’s eye-
blushes like morn’s sun

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Moon waning crescent
Hides behind clouds of shame-
Shyly look at radiant sun

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Dew melting softly
Sighs in bluish moonlight-
kisses feet of svelte lass

Anjali
16-01-2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obinna Eruchie 15 May 2009

that is a nice haiku you have written on the moon with beautiful images.

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Vinod Ak 14 May 2009

Lovely Haiku! ! ! ! Great Imagination! ! 10+++

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anurag duggal 11 May 2009

Moon Clouds and romance lovely write :)

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Aashish Ameya 11 May 2009

full of mysteries...nice Hikus

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Isaiah Grey 10 May 2009

I love the idea behind these three haiku. Beautifully written, evocative and yet leaving so much to our imagination. Job well done.

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A moon that shines like tha sun.

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all the three were excellent and beautiful

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Ken E Hall 14 June 2009

Each one melts into each other so good I am moonstruck the work is excellent +++++++10. regards avanice1

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Priyanka Bhowmick 09 June 2009

wonderful haiku's composed altogether on the moon..10 up.

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Ken E Hall 16 May 2009

Wow a trio of what goes on in the moonlight written with such class a delight at night+++++++10 Regards uavanice1

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