My love so intense
like fragrant musk's incense
Would
permeate you
hypnotize you
anesthetize you
And you will shed tears of Joy.
My love so hot
like blazing sunspots
Would torment you
torture you
tantalize you
And you will shed tears of Joy.
My love so calm,
like soothing divine balm
Would comfort you
caress you
heal you
And you will shed tears of Joy.
My love so high
like majestic sky
Would shelter you
protect you
comfort you
And you will shed tears of Joy.
My love so forgiver
like pristine pure river
Would cleanse you
purify you
rectify you
And you will shed tears of Joy.
My love so divine
like Old bottled wine
Would energize you
galvanize you
divinize you
And you will shed tears of Joy.
My passion
emanating from divine station
would shock you
rock you
knock you
And you will shed tears of joy.
My emotions
healing as divine potion
would envelope you
embrace you
embarrass you
And you will shed tears of joy.
My divine eyes
calmer than sky
would chase you
daze you
amaze you
My Baby!
And you will shed tears of joy.
ANJALI SINHA
18-12-2008
ike fragrant musk’s incense....... would hypnotize you............... .................................... like blazing sunspots Would torment you...........what a love so intense yet being dichotomous by joy and sorrows in the matrix of love, that betides even by reeks of anger when love is unacknowledged on its altar of sacredness, wonderful flow of heart when heaved by sorrows, yet very passionate and poignant, write too ingenious by imagery,10++++++, thanks for sharing
wow..realy liked the flow and the rhytm of the poem..so very beautiful...great one Anju.enjoyed it very much..not like some sick poems I read from recently.. cheers Anju.//cheers and cheeers for you 10+++
My love so hot like blazing sunspots Would torment you torture you tantalize you And you will shed tears of Joy. Really? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Really......... a lovely poem to touch the heart......... penetrated...........10+++++++++++++++++++++
lovely title anju...cute... everything you will do to show your love and to have your love... definitely you can...by your words so enchanting and your heart so pure.. no one could not shed tears of joy of having you.... this piece speaks how sweet and lovely you are and very worth loving for... 10+++
A poem of love expressing the deepest feelings..unique one...
My divine eyes calmer than sky would chase you daze you amaze you My Baby! And you will shed tears of joy. The best lines in my eye. Any person with a heart would long for being that baby...when you are so promising a lover. Great poem! ! Thanks for the creation.
The diverse shades of love expressed with poetic precision. Each nuance has been finely etched. Do you even need to ask the rating?
My love is so high, so devine, so hot, so calm ans sooooooo beautiful..........Love is eternal, you dear Anjali, the poem is so lovely! ! ! I need the miracle of words..Thank you for this sweet poem
my comments so true would appease you please you adulate you sweep you elate you and u shall smile forever young poetess
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
an excellent beautiful poem wonderfully written...10++++