banamala sen


A Mystery - Poem by banamala sen

I can never stop loving you - that's the problem!

Not in Summer, not in Winter,

Not in Sun, not in Snow,

Never!

Can you stop loving me?



Many many months ago, many many years ago,

Blossomed a feeling, and the feeling grew,

Without any reason.

It just grew and grew - nobody knew

Until one day it shocked its owners!



What do I do with this feeling?

It does not leave me, although it should,

It does not allow me to rest, although I need rest.

So, I am handing it to you,

and let you know the existence of

an inexplicable, irresistible, mystery

in my soul,

in my happiness,

in my sorrow,

in my woe.

I can not stop.

Topic(s) of this poem: love, love and life

Form: Free Verse


Comments about A Mystery by banamala sen

  • Baquee Billah Ahmed (9/7/2018 6:01:00 AM)

    nice writing.............. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/10/2018 6:01:00 AM)

    Beautiful expression of inner feelings deep down in the mind. (Report)Reply

    (7/26/2018 6:47:00 AM)

    Thank you. Delighted to share.

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  • (6/19/2018 3:33:00 AM)

    What a pure and strong kind of love...will linger forever...through all eternity..10++ (Report)Reply

    (7/26/2018 6:46:00 AM)

    Thank you, Jez. Your thoughtful comments are always and so much appreciated. I am thrilled.

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  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (4/9/2018 7:56:00 AM)

    Wow what a great, exciting, appealing monologue with the Centre of your Universe!
    The poem fingers on the strings of your reader's heart so delicately dear Banamala.
    Thanks for the sharing.
    10++++++++++++
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    (4/9/2018 1:11:00 PM)

    Dear Poet, I am thrilled to read your comments. Who can appreciate a poet more than another poet? Thank you.

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  • Drtony Brahmin (4/8/2018 3:46:00 PM)

    an inexplicable, irresistible, mystery
    in my soul,
    in my happiness,
    in my sorrow,
    in my woe.
    I can not stop. love, life, desire, wishes, fear of losing. mystery......... thank u dear poet. tony
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    (4/9/2018 1:13:00 PM)

    Thanks very much. You got all the themes together for my short poem!

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  • (4/3/2018 3:55:00 PM)

    Love is really full of mysteries...It cannot choose the person to be loved...sometimes you tend to love the most unlovable one...crazy sometimes, but that is love, you cannot dictate your heart.. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem....will be added to my poem list and of course 10++++++++++++ (Report)Reply

    (4/3/2018 4:40:00 PM)

    You are so right - love comes on its own, in a mysterious way! Thank you for your lovely comments and your rating - unbelievable!

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  • Jazib Kamalvi (4/2/2018 9:19:00 PM)

    A good start with a nice poem, Banamala. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you. (Report)Reply

    (4/3/2018 1:58:00 PM)

    Thanks so much. Yes, this is the start, but you will see more. I will definitely read your poem.

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  • Chinedu Dike (3/31/2018 2:31:00 PM)

    Beautiful love poem conveying deep feelings with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. A nice creation, Sen. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched. (Report)Reply

    (3/31/2018 5:40:00 PM)

    Thanks so much for your kind review. Hope to continue writing poems expressing my feelings. I also hope to learn from passionate poet-friends like you at PM.

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 31, 2018

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 1, 2018


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