A Mystery Poem by banamala sen

A Mystery

Rating: 5.0

I can never stop loving you - that's the problem!

Not in Summer, not in Winter,

Not in Sun, not in Snow,


Can you stop loving me?

Many many months ago, many many years ago,

Blossomed a feeling, and the feeling grew,

Without any reason.

It just grew and grew - nobody knew

Until one day it shocked its owners!

What do I do with this feeling?

It does not leave me, although it should,

It does not allow me to rest, although I need rest.

So, I am handing it to you,

and let you know the existence of

an inexplicable, irresistible, mystery

in my soul,

in my happiness,

in my sorrow,

in my woe.

I can not stop.

Saturday, March 31, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and life
Chinedu Dike 31 March 2018

Beautiful love poem conveying deep feelings with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. A nice creation, Sen. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 07 September 2018

nice writing..............

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Ratan Ghosh 10 July 2018

Beautiful expression of inner feelings deep down in the mind.

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Banamala Sen 26 July 2018

Thank you. Delighted to share.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 April 2018

Wow what a great, exciting, appealing monologue with the Centre of your Universe! The poem fingers on the strings of your reader's heart so delicately dear Banamala. Thanks for the sharing. 10++++++++++++

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Banamala Sen 09 April 2018

Dear Poet, I am thrilled to read your comments. Who can appreciate a poet more than another poet? Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 April 2018

an inexplicable, irresistible, mystery in my soul, in my happiness, in my sorrow, in my woe. I can not stop. love, life, desire, wishes, fear of losing. mystery......... thank u dear poet. tony

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Banamala Sen 09 April 2018

Thanks very much. You got all the themes together for my short poem!

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 April 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Banamala. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Banamala Sen 03 April 2018

Thanks so much. Yes, this is the start, but you will see more. I will definitely read your poem.

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