A New Dream Poem by Thampi KEE

A New Dream

Rating: 4.9


A single lone bird
you cry for ever
carrying a green meadow
in this dreamy world
I give you mine
you give me fine
life is not sad
sad way you said

People we love
weeping cry for love
must give me yours
five handful love
you give me
your five fingers
and full of love
not soaking and blending into mass bath of blood
pat the love for love
A single lone bird
I love you

break the heart for love
breaking my words for love
barely my love for the heart
What you say
could change this world again
dont delay the cry for this love
break the heart you love for them

I give you mine
you give me
your five handful,
and break the heartful
soaking into the mass of bath....
A single lone bird
you cry for ever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Walterrean Salley 10 October 2011

... I give you mine you give me fine life is not sad sad way you said True, life is not sad. But life is what we make of it. Keep sharing Thampi. Thank you.

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 June 2011

very nice.the way you have communicated with birds is touching.loved it.

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Rinki Nandy 21 June 2011

A single lone bird you cry for ever... why is singleness always related to crying? I agree that there's nothing nice in isolation and it doesn't always end in tears.

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Geetima Baruah Sarma 07 April 2011

Excellent, expressions beautifully crafted.

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Enjoyable read that touches the heart! Well penned.; D

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Valsa George 08 July 2019

There is craving for love in everyone! The lone bird also is craving for love! The poet is ready to give his love to the bird in return for its love! In this world it is love that holds everything in place! A beautiful sentiment powerfully expressed.

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Ruby Mostazir 16 December 2013

nice :)

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Sarojini Pattayat 14 November 2012

nice poem.Third stanza is interesting. Best wishes.

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beautiful poem, good use of short lines.

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Lawrence H 18 March 2012

Thampi, A cry for a new love dream. Good poem using metaphor..

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