What a poem should be?
Hand picked words, precisely lined up
As if in an act of peace
To reflect, introspectively
And to discover a new meaning.
Passions conceive the poem
On the bed filled with verbiage
Enchant the fibres of heart
Melodious to the ears; where it
Stimulates the senses
Hedonistic with in itself, each line
Oscillates beyond the obvious;
Undoes the woeful knots
Liberates the jaded mind
Dances on its musical measure
Braces up for a new pair of eyes
Eager to allow another's mind to listen.
An acorstic, What - a - poem - should - be.
True and well said.....what is the art of poetry all about.10++++ Thanks we have Ronald Peat, Carl Harris, Indian poets etc. who are very visible in extending their knowledge to help those like me in writing poetry. From them and great friends here in PH our ideas are widdening, moving better into the world of art.
:) ...... a question which every person ask.... nicely said... :)
each line should oscillate beyond the obvious.....very well written...10
Stimulates the senses Hedonistic with in itself, each line Oscillates beyond the obvious; Undoes the woeful knots Liberates the jaded mind Dances on its musical measure It seems a beautiful response to someone who told you how to write a poem.... beautiful poem.
With your love of words you can write anything. As young as you are you have many years in which to do so! '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Good description about a poem. Thanks for sharing.