A Parking Ticket Poem by nimal dunuhinga

A Parking Ticket

Rating: 5.0


It's payable and compulsory that I know well
And thank you so much my dear sir for the notice of a fine for illegal parking.
But I never expect that a parasite's tumbledown old crock parked in the paradise road is an offense?

* Long live my loving Mother-in-Law 'Virginia' and I bless you for an immediate recovery, thank you so much for giving me a right partner and I remember the bygone happy days together we enjoyed that would never come.Oh! we are scattered like quicksilver.

Thursday, July 10, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: old,giving,happy,mother,remember,together
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 10 July 2008

Very ironic. An interesting play on words. But what to do? One must belong somewhere. Excellent write, Nimal. I also appreciate the nostalgic postscript dedicated to your mother-in-law. Wishing her better very soon. Always your friend, Sandra

0 0 Reply
Tai Chi Italy 10 July 2008

lol I am not quite sure what to say on this little ditty nimal, you encompass two evils on society in one! lol I love the quickwit sliver here! you should try two mother in laws! lmbao Tai

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
nimal dunuhinga

nimal dunuhinga

kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
Close
Error Success