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A Play Of Rays

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a play of the sun rays in a glade
is a riddle for me whether the sun isn't abusing
its competence
dropping this hot a weapon
on green grass
golden rays are romping
about then immoderately

it is burning green stalks mercilessly
sometimes a rain to hit it through
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excellent write with deep and meaningful images...lovely to read
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Indira Renganathan 24 September 2009
Nice thematic nature-poem....lovely
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Nikunj Sharma 31 August 2009
this is 3 s for me - short, sweet and stimulating............also 3 E, exciting, exhilirating and enticing...good write
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Ahmad Shiddiqi 21 March 2009
very reliefing and very suprising! same as when Monet shook the world with his Impression: Sunrise. keep writing!
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Dagmara Anna 17 March 2009
Subtle and...hot poem :) Very nice. I like it.
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