A Poem - 001 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

A Poem - 001

Rating: 5.0


To write a poem
Is a task-

Not so easy as making a cup of tea
Nor so difficult as breaking a fence
To set a prisoner free.

But it is as good as breaking a way
Into the most mysterious cave

In the land of Semi-dark shadows
Cast upon the suffocating hearts

By Souls divine and Bright
By minds sharp and wise
By fingers long and sensitive
By lips wet, soft and attractive

In a moment
When the shy moon is impregnated
By the blue desires of a Lily.

Thursday, September 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: blues,moon,poems,poetic expression,writing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Aparajita Das 08 September 2017

In the land of Semi-dark shadows Cast upon the suffocating hearts By Souls divine and Bright By minds sharp and wise By fingers long and sensitive By lips wet, soft and attractive Nicely penned haiku. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 September 2017

Thanks Neetu for the remarks.

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Sabita Sahoo 08 September 2017

By Souls divine and Bright By minds sharp and wise By fingers long and sensitive By lips wet, soft and attractive In a moment When the shy moon is impregnated By the blue desires of a Lily. Nicely penned. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 September 2017

Thanks Sabita for the appreciation.

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Tom Billsborough 10 September 2017

Love the astonishing final image of a very good poem, Subhas.10 out of 10 from me.

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Sabita Sahoo 29 September 2017

In a moment When the shy moon is impregnated By the blue desires of a Lily. Great poem sir. Thanks. 10+++

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Biswa Ranjan Nayak 24 September 2017

In a moment When the shy moon is impregnated By the blue desires of a Lily. Beautiful description. Thanks poet. 10+++

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 September 2017

Subhas, this is a wonderful series that you are beginning of what a poem should be or is. Yes! i most heartily agree! I it is as good as breaking a way Into the most mysterious cave Looking forward to reading all. Thank you Subhas - A full vote

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Sanjukta Sahoo 17 September 2017

nicely penned.Thanks poet for the sharing. 10+++

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D Priyanka Singh 17 September 2017

When the shy moon is impregnated By the blue desires of a Lily. Beautiful. 10++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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