A Poem's Like An Iceberg Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

A Poem's Like An Iceberg

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A poem if that be better, better be brief,
One that flows and floats like a dry leaf,
Hidden like an iceberg,
Set to sail smooth and snug,
What's unsaid and unseen rife like riff.
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A poem they say should project an iceberg theory: To say more in less (words) . This means: the visible poem is but a small part of what is being said. In jazz short phrases, called riff, are repeated rife.
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Reflections | 03.09.18 |

Thursday, January 17, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 17 January 2019

Let me thank Mohammad Asim Nehal, Mahtab Bangalee, and Ruta Mahapatra for their heart-warming feedback.

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Ruta Mohapatra 17 January 2019

Short and expressive! Speaks volumes! Thanks for sharing!

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 January 2019

rife to riff........./ more in less words in poetic ink/ great wit - superb+10

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M Asim Nehal 17 January 2019

Very well thought poem, thanks for sharing it.10+

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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