This haunts my sleep
It burns out smiles, assuaging nothing as it does so.
Feeding my depression and fanning the flames of my heartache.
Can't you tell me that everything will be alright?
That I have made stupid mistakes
But that you will love me anyways
Will be healed of my hurt.
I'm still waiting your answer
Until then I hear nothing
No empty words looking like lies
I see nothing
Not the reflection of my dark eyes in yours
I feel nothing
No sinful caress of the skin
Nothing but the beating in my heart
and the throbbing of my head
Everything, next to kills me
Everything says you've moved on
And that you don't want me.
Tell me is this true?
You know I didn't lie
When I said I would die for you
and I would never want to hurt you.
You are my one true love
and the light in my soul
So please, darling please
Please come back,
...
Please?
There's a lot of emotion here and you've expressed it so well. I love how you wrote it in first person. It adds to the powerful effect. I'm sorry for your lose. But it's a beautiful poem!
u have a strong, beautiful voice dont be afraid to tell people what you think
a good voice to your thoughts. isnt that wat poetry is? poetry paves the unseen road. it voices the ineffable...
Very impressive! A powerful and moving write that clearly gives you away! I love the flow and rich imagery embedded on it! Even through pain we can find the courage to let it all out of our hearts and mind and this is a good example! I like it! 10+++ Well deserved! Keep inspiring the World with more such thought provoking writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...
Yeah, really depicted one, who's sick cos his love is leaving him in despair, nice work,
this is such a great poem, u can feel the heartache
I always think about what you'll write next... And everytime I can relate to it... It was a great read, and I'd love to read more. But, I have to say, I've thought a lot about you lately... -Trysta
such a sad meaninful poem. had a major effect on meh. great write. ~Tori~
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your lay out is perfect and the poems very moving... the first person writing was great... I'm sorry you had your heart broken... I hate how it hurts... well rips a hole in your chest... don't you?