Kyle Jones

Rookie - 3 Points (July 30th 1990 - / Tegucigalpa: Honduras: Carribean)

A Poem To Fan The Flames Of Heartache - Poem by Kyle Jones

This haunts my sleep
It burns out smiles, assuaging nothing as it does so.
Feeding my depression and fanning the flames of my heartache.
Can't you tell me that everything will be alright?
That I have made stupid mistakes
But that you will love me anyways

Will be healed of my hurt.
I'm still waiting your answer
Until then I hear nothing
No empty words looking like lies
I see nothing
Not the reflection of my dark eyes in yours
I feel nothing
No sinful caress of the skin
Nothing but the beating in my heart
and the throbbing of my head
Everything, next to kills me

Everything says you've moved on
And that you don't want me.
Tell me is this true?
You know I didn't lie
When I said I would die for you
and I would never want to hurt you.
You are my one true love
and the light in my soul
So please, darling please
Please come back,
...
Please?


Comments about A Poem To Fan The Flames Of Heartache by Kyle Jones

  • Romeo Della Valle (10/18/2011 6:48:00 PM)

    Very impressive! A powerful and moving write that clearly gives you away! I love the flow and rich imagery embedded on it! Even through pain we can find the courage to let it all out of our hearts and mind and this is a good example! I like it! 10+++ Well deserved! Keep inspiring the World with more such thought provoking writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City... (Report)Reply

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  • (9/25/2011 2:06:00 PM)

    Yeah, really depicted one, who's sick cos his love is leaving him in despair, nice work, (Report)Reply

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  • (9/1/2011 11:56:00 PM)

    this is such a great poem, u can feel the heartache (Report)Reply

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  • (7/20/2010 6:39:00 PM)

    I always think about what you'll write next... And everytime I can relate to it... It was a great read, and I'd love to read more. But, I have to say, I've thought a lot about you lately...
    -Trysta
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  • (2/5/2010 2:22:00 PM)

    such a sad meaninful poem. had a major effect on meh. great write.

    ~Tori~
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  • (9/8/2009 10:41:00 AM)

    Your lay out is perfect and the poems very moving... the first person writing was great... I'm sorry you had your heart broken... I hate how it hurts... well rips a hole in your chest... don't you? (Report)Reply

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  • (8/22/2009 7:29:00 AM)

    There's a lot of emotion here and you've expressed it so well. I love how you wrote it in first person. It adds to the powerful effect. I'm sorry for your lose. But it's a beautiful poem! (Report)Reply

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  • (6/17/2009 10:20:00 AM)

    nice poem need more happiness in your life (Report)Reply

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  • Makayla Straight (5/9/2009 1:47:00 AM)

    u have a strong, beautiful voice dont be afraid to tell people what you think (Report)Reply

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  • (11/20/2008 9:55:00 PM)

    a good voice to your thoughts. isnt that wat poetry is? poetry paves the unseen road. it voices the ineffable... (Report)Reply

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  • (11/3/2008 9:37:00 PM)

    wow this is a really good poem. It's sad when we love someone who doesn't love us back. Or when that person just doesn't love us anymore. This was beautifully written. I hope your heart heals. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/27/2008 7:08:00 PM)

    ... ='(............................... (Report)Reply

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  • (9/16/2008 7:47:00 AM)

    touching. I also liked the line about the reflection of your eyes. beautiful imagery. on another note: YOU TOOK AWAY ALL OF YOUR OTHER POEMS.: ( i guess it's just time to start anew. also, could you post a translation of your bio cuz i'm really curious about what it says. and, what is clavespada? i tried translating your new name but the website didn't know what clavespada was. plz? for all us non-bilingual people? : P (Report)Reply

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  • (7/12/2008 7:04:00 PM)

    'I see nothing
    Not the reflection of my dark eyes in yours'...

    beautiful line which says it all...great work
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  • Evaughn Gray (7/12/2008 4:35:00 PM)

    ouch, very good poem, heartache hurts terribly..and i know the feeling..~Eva (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 11, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 28, 2008


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