This Is The Poem Poem by Kyle Jones

This Is The Poem

Rating: 5.0


This is the part of the poem where Things like love
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My hand glides across your bedroom wall as I dim the lights,
The shadows hiding in your mind, body and heart,
Take fright when your pulse quickens and your body gets warm
Oceans part when our lips entwine,
Our voices carry on throughout the entirety of a sleepless night
And every gasping breath we take brews into a whirlwind
Where you and I, feathers dancing in the current
Willingly, are swept away into heavenly oblivion
And like the goddess you are, we scream
Creating, inexplicable lights behind my ribs
Your eyes, like arrows, they penetrate me,
Much like your caress always does
This is the part of the poem where things like despair,
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tyease Collins 26 December 2008

Wow......beautiful poem heh. As always. I kinda got a weird feeling from reading it hmm..... Anyways i love ya -Tyease P.S-Hmm.....i wonder who inspired you.... =]

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Vinod Kumar 01 January 2009

A well written poem, an energetic grace i found in it, Thank you author for the dynamic expression, keep writing.Happy 2009 Wishes,

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Jaci Burns 13 May 2009

very well written. it is wonderous no words or phrases throw off others.its amazing

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Makayla Straight 07 July 2009

Wow this is so good,10+ You are a great poet, Better than me... Which of coursed everybody is better than me

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Emma Adamyan 31 October 2009

comparing eyes with arrows i liked. in a very passionate way it is well done

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Heather Wilkins 10 August 2014

a nice piece of poetry good imagery enjoyed

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Heather Wilkins 10 August 2014

a nice piece of poetry good imagery enjoyed

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Heather Wilkins 10 August 2014

a nice piece of poetry good imagery enjoyed

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Vipins Puthooran 04 August 2012

Amazing! ! ! ! such a wonderful feel! ! ! ! ! Really a fine piece! ! ! ! top markssss

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Romeo Della Valle 15 July 2012

Bravo! Kyle! A reservoir of penning thoughts and rich imagery filtered in this well crafted write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Your talent is clearly shown in this write! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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