! ! ! ! ! A Proposition- Haiku! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! A Proposition- Haiku! ! ! !

Rating: 5.0


Shall we elope, said
he... looking with limpid eyes;
Right person, wrong time...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 29 March 2009

Yes, it has both humour and truth! Stajit Roy's movie - 'Kapurush and Mahamurush ' was great! In the 'Kapurush' short story, the hero fails to elope/ marry his college sweetheart! She gets married to a tea garden manager! Later the hero goes there to write a novel. He wants to know if she still loved him? ! ! When he was waiting at the station for his departure train, she comes to meet him, -perhaps to say she still loved him! The ' kapurus' hero again fails to take any action! Kapurush= the Coward! Ray leaves a few thoughts for his readers! -10! - Raj Nandy

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 03 April 2009

Everything gets wrong when time is not right.

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Lynda Robson 06 April 2009

There is a time and place for everything, including a proposal to elope, good haiku Mamta, Lynda xx 10

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 07 April 2009

Shall we elope, said he... looking with limpid eyes; Right time, wrong person................Good Write

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Kesav Easwaran 01 May 2009

Your haiku reminded me of Charles Dickens's Em'ly...there, centuries back, she said 'yes'...for she was younger! well, 'think of my comments at their best', Mamta! ...nice Ku...has flair and fragrance inside it...10

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Bob Blackwell 09 April 2009

Great Haiku, no luck life is tough.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 07 April 2009

Mamtaji, This question Devdas asks Paru, long after her marriage, when he became a full-scale sot, but not with limpid eyes but with droopy eyes. Yes! It was a wrong time there too. Very good expression.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 07 April 2009

Mamtaji, This question Devdas asks Paru, long after her marriage, when he became a full-scale sot, but not with limpid eyes but with droopy eyes. Yes! It was a wrong time there too. Very good expression.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 07 April 2009

Mamtaji, This question Devdas asks Paru, long after her marriage, when he became a full-scale sot, but not with limpid eyes but with droopy eyes. Yes! It was a wrong time there too. Very good expression.

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